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Example 1 (Photography)

Good morning everyone,

Today I’m going to talk about my hobby: photography.

Let me start by explaining how I began. I started a few years ago when my parents gave me a camera. At first, I didn’t know how to use it, but I learned by watching videos and practicing a lot.

Next, I’ll talk about why I enjoy photography. It is both creative and technical. You need to think carefully about light, angles, and composition. Although it can sometimes be expensive and time-consuming, I find it very rewarding.

Finally, I’d like to say that photography is a great way to express yourself and capture special moments.

To sum up, photography is a challenging but enjoyable hobby that allows you to be creative and develop new skills.

Thank you for listening. Please feel free to ask any questions.

Example 2 (Social Media)

Hello everyone,

Today I’d like to talk about social media and its impact on our lives.

Let me start with a general idea. Social media platforms such as Instagram and TikTok are used every day for communication, entertainment, and information.

Next, I’ll discuss the advantages. Social media allows people to connect with others, share ideas, and even learn new things.

However, this brings me to an important point: there are also disadvantages. Many people spend too much time online, which can affect their productivity and mood.

Finally, I’d like to say that social media can be both positive and negative, depending on how we use it.

To conclude, social media is a powerful tool, but we should use it responsibly.

Thank you very much for your attention. Does anyone have any questions?